Comic 21 - Ch 1 - Enter Artem, Light Mage! - Page 16

24th Sep 2017, 10:45 PM in Chapter 1 - Enter Artem, Light Mage!
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Ch 1 - Enter Artem, Light Mage! - Page 16
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Rajeet Dave 24th Sep 2017, 10:45 PM edit delete
Rajeet Dave
Okay get comfy people because it's behind-the-scenes time. And this week I've got a doozy for you!

So what you won't see behind this update is that this the last 6 pages of Ch 1 got rewritten to hell and back. Especially as Gust split off from Artem on page 8. Originally this wasn't intended to happen and we actually got a few more pages of argument.

At first it was Maurice vs Gust (who caught him after Artem bust in and smacked Ramon upside the head) and Gust actually argued back. Artem's role was largely the same throughout this thankfully so I didn't have to alter much of his stuff apart from maybe the last few pages.

ALSO instead of the town citizen's actually having their priorities straight and wanting to get the hell outta there, they actually egged Maurice on until Artem said his line and got them to shut up. So yeah, the whole mage vs humans angle was laid on EXTRA THICC and played to the town's stupidity.

BASICALLY I'm really glad I changed it xD

Comments:

khkddn 25th Sep 2017, 6:03 AM edit delete reply
khkddn
jeez, not even a thank you? learn some manners, maurice.
Rajeet Dave 25th Sep 2017, 9:32 AM edit delete reply
Rajeet Dave
Haha, I think he's still salty af from all that smack Ramon talked at him earlier - he'll come around (when hell freezes over?) :P